The first unit of literacy essential for me was the Coming of age narrative essay. The essay is to write an event, or someone have marks a major transition in a person’s life. This writing will reflect the moment of my life that have changed me to a wiser and more matured person. One of the challenges in this assignment was choosing the ideal theme to write about, because my life have many moments that changed me as a person. There are nine main theme to chooses, I decided to choose a theme called “Something that I’m grateful for”. The reason that I choose this theme because I very grateful for a person to come into my life , which has help me to become a stronger person. Another issue that I had when I tried to form this essay together was the finding the most appropriate hook that most convince the readers and turned my event into life. No matter what the challenges are, I managed to work through the problems and learned from the problem that I had. “Love is in the air; love is everything, love is about caring, and love is everywhere.” In my narrative essay hook, I used three main skills such as parallel structure, anaphora and metaphor. My essay titled as Love has transformed my whole life. I’m not going to tell you what is it about, but I’m going to spotlight some of the best part.
“She was the key that unlocked my door to this new and better world. After, I learnt from her more, I had progressively started to understand that time management and choosing the right works to do are very essential aspects to being a good student and prevailing in life.”
“People around me have said relationships have adverse effects on student learning, and they are risky and foolish. However, this phrase does not apply to me; it has the opposite effect.”
“One thing I can say from this love, I believed I have proved those people and myself wrong. Love has transformed my whole life and made a better person out of me.”
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